With
today's post, it's official that my self-imposed blackout on all
released from the West Coast-based Odd Future Wolf Gang Kill Them All
camp officially only extends to the leader of the movement, Tyler,
The Creator. Yeah, I fucking said it. I know a lot of you two are
curious as to why I choose to ignore his work when there are so many
other shitty artists within our chosen genre. To which I say:
Because shut up, that's why.
During
my extended hiatus a few months ago, Blogland threw up its collective arms at the
major label debut of Odd Future's resident cypher, Thebe “Earl
Sweatshirt” Kgositsile. Said debut, Doris, was such a
highly-anticipated project that hip hop heads were convinced that
Earl was somehow ushering in a new iPhone in musical form. As an
artist, Earl was coming into the game with a shitload of publicity:
aside from the critical acclaim for his first album, the freebie Earl
(including what I wrote back in the day but nowhere near the original release date), he had an intriguing
backstory (involving a mysterious evacuation from the country, which
was later revealed to be not quite so dramatic, but still) that all
but guaranteed that his fanbase would run out on day one and download
the fucker from iTunes, if only because it was nothing short of a
miracle that the kid recorded a second album in the first place.
And
then it faded into relative obscurity.
I
noticed that fans, bloggers, and the like quickly dismissed Doris for
various reasons: the music itself wasn't up to par, nothing sounded
like the teaser single “Chum”, Earl's flow seemed tired and
without energy, and what have you. It was at that moment that I
tuned out anything and everything I could find about Earl
Sweatshirt's Doris. I didn't want my opinion to be tainted by random
folks on the Interweb, which is somehow different that me influencing
a reader to purchase something (I don't know how, but it just is), so
I excused myself from the conversation. Didn't even bother listening
to it until now, several months after its street date, in the hope of
giving Earl a fair trial.
Perhaps
all of my concern was for naught: according to the wealth of trusty
knowledge that is Wikipedia, every goddamn critic and their
grandmother praised the shit out of Doris, lauding Earl's transition
to more innovative rhymes, his focus and how it related to the
overall tone of the album, its uncompromising vision, and the
excellent use of the guest stars. Of which there are many: damn near
every track on Doris features someone for Earl to bounce off of. And
since Doris is supposed to be his major label debut, that constitutes
a major problem for me, unless everyone just contributes a hook and
nothing else. Not sure how this is supposed to be a showcase for
Earl Sweatshirt if he's forced to share the spotlight with lesser Odd
Future collaborators.
Well...
1.
PRE (FEAT. SK LA' FLARE)
Curiously,
the first voice heard on Earl's commercial debut is that of the guest
star, who manages to come across as a simpler, slower version of our
host who lost his rhyming dictionary but did remember to suck the
helium out of not one, but two balloons he swiped from his little sister's
birthday party inside the Playplace of McDonald's yesterday
afternoon, throwing in a request for bitches to “pop that pussy”
just to prove that he's conscious of current hip hop trends (that
being the rapper's love of thrusting vaginas). Earl steps in with a
minute to spare in an attempt to save the day, but while he sounds
like a more natural fit over Michael “Uzi” Uzowuru's sprawling,
Maniac Cop-esque score, his apathetic flow fails to drive home the
fact that he's supposed to be the star attraction. Not a great sign.
2.
BURGUNDY (FEAT. VINCE STAPLES)
The
guest star credit is a red herring, since all Odd Future treasurer
Vince Staples contributes to the Neptunes-produced “Burgundy”
are...well, not so much words of encouragement as simple commands to
rap, since, as he puts it, nobody gives a shit about Earl's personal
life. Our host ignores the plea, opening his first of two verses by
explaining that he couldn't even visit his ailing grandmother in
hospice because of all of the pressure to deliver Doris to the label.
Sadly, “Burgundy” isn't good enough to warrant ignoring your own
family, even with the ringers brought in to produce (both Pharrell
“Mr. Summer Jam 2013” Williams and Chad Hugo receive writing
credits, so either Chad actually reconnected with his partner or
Skateboard P sold our host an older beat): maybe he threw that shit
in as a way to deflect all critical barbs that may come his way?
Whatever the case, this should have been much better, especially as
Earl grows more comfortable with both the music and the spotlight as
the track rolls on. More of that, please.
3.
20 WAVE CAPS (FEAT. DOMO GENESIS)
Thus
far, there hasn't been anything on Doris that could qualify as an
actual song: both “Pre” and “Burgundy” are merely collections
of verses without any clear connections. “20 Wave Caps” does
nothing to change this, although Earl does shout out his homey Domo
Genesis's name at the beginning of his performance (which takes place
after Dom gets his verse in – Earl is nothing if not generous to
his guests), so at least this was intended to always be a
collaboration. Probably. When the most memorable aspect of a song
is how producer Samiyam (alongside our host) slows the beat down to a
crawl at the very end, scaring the listener into thinking his iPod is
somehow malfunctioning (I would have written “him or her” there,
but come on, does Odd Future really have that much of a female
following?), you know you've fucked up. Domo and Earl even kind of
sound alike on here, and neither impressed me, so.
4.
SUNDAY (FEAT. FRANK OCEAN)
Way
back in 2012, Odd Future crooner Frank Ocean released his commercial
debut, channel ORANGE, to loads of critical acclaim, some of which
was generated by a duet with Earl Sweatshirt, “Super Rich Kids”.
Now, I can't speak to the quality of “Super Rich Kids”, since I
have yet to listen to channel ORANGE (I know, I know), but it still
makes sense that Frankie would return the favor by appearing on
Doris. However, even though he refers to “Sunday” as “melodic”,
Ocean doesn't sing on here: instead, he raps, as he sometimes does,
and he steals the focus from our host by touching ever so lightly on
his parking-lot brawl with that cocksucker Chris Brown, which he
brushes off as a “what else was I supposed to do?”-type response
(it was allegedly self-defense, after all) while still taking some
mild pride in the outcome (“Why's his mug all bloody / It was a
three on one”, Ocean says with a smirk visible through all of time and
space). Earl's verse, which sounds faux-apologetic before he
succumbs to his own selfish whims, was also alright, and his own beat
certainly wasn't plain. Probably the most enjoyable track on Doris
so far, and it even has a chorus! Of sorts.
5.
HIVE (FEAT. VINCE STAPLES & CASEY VEGGIES)
The
second single from Doris is a miscalculation, in that there are only
two memorable aspects of this track, neither of which really involves
our host. Earl delivers two verses (and half a hook) in such an
apathetic fashion (that at least meshes with the Matt Martians beat,
in that the music also doesn't seem to give a shit about anything)
that you fear he'll realize the silliness of his career choice and
drop the microphone mid-performance to get a real fucking job, and
that lack of investment lingers throughout like a cloud of goddamn
regret and remorse. To be fair, he does get in one good idea
regarding the twisted priorities of the local Los Angeles-area media
and how they give more of a shit about the Lakers than they do crime
statistics among a specific demographic (they seem to be taking a
Lisa Simpson / Paul Anka “Just Don't Look” philosophy in the hope
that the problems will solve themselves somehow). Problem is, Earl
is upstaged by Vince Staples, who spits a fucking excellent verse
chock-full of the swagger and boasts Earl seems to have eschewed,
and, in what has quickly turned into my favorite part of the song,
Casey Veggies delivers the other half of the chorus, ending on the
catchy-as-fuck line “Like it's nothing 'cause it's nothing, bitch”
(italics mine, but implied during the track). Come to think of it,
that one line is probably the only reason “Hive” was released as
a single. Try to work it into a conversation: you'll be surprised
how well it'll fit.
6.
CHUM
Ah
yes, the song that turned me on to Earl in the first goddamn place. (That and Odd Future's "Oldie", if you remember the previous Earl review.)
When listened to within the context of Doris, I'm struck at both how
personal the lyrics are (a fact that gets mentioned more than a few
times on the project, since I'm adding this sentence after having
finished the album) and how detached he seems from them all at once.
This is a strange sensation, as this is the exact
same song that he leaked last year (although some extra interlude
music is tacked on at the very end). However, that detachment works,
since it's almost as though he's trying to observe himself
impartially (“brush[ing] the dirt off [his] psyche”, in a way).
Our host's simple loop (produced alongside Christian Rich) still
sounds pretty great, as do our host's bars: “Chum” comes across
as the perfect bridge between Earl and Doris, sound-wise.
Proof that, when he gives a shit, Earl can spit. Where was this
level of effort on the rest of the album, dude?
7.
SASQUATCH (FEAT. TYLER, THE CREATOR)
Tyler,
The Creator's instrumental is actually really goddamn good: it sounds
like something The RZA would have used for a Wu-Tang Clan b-side that
would eventually end up on the nonexistent third volume in the
Wu-Chronicles series. Unfortunately, even though our host sounds
alert for the first time since birth probably, he also lets Tyler
(the leader of the Odd Future movement, and also his rhyme partner in
the duo EarlWolf) provide the first verse, and Ty-Ty makes it very
clear that he's just fucking around and not taking shit seriously (he
even goes out of the way to declare himself as sucking, just so that
any criticism contained within this paragraph is rendered moot, but
I'll say it anyway: he sucked). Now, there's nothing wrong with not
taking the rhymes seriously if the overall track sounds good, but
nobody only purchases half a fucking song. Give this beat back to
Earl and give him a second chance to secure a better collaborator,
and we'll talk.
8.
CENTURION (FEAT. VINCE STAPLES)
It's
either insanely nice or incredibly fucking stupid of Earl to
consistently allow his guests to perform before him on each track on
Doris thus far (save for “Hive”). Vince Staples is the lucky
winner on “Centurion”, and although absolutely nobody is
clamoring for a solo album from the dude, he spits his goddamn heart
out anyway over a Christian Rich beat that doesn't even fucking
resemble something that one could rhyme over at first. When our host
begins speaking, the background morphs into what sounds like the
score from a poorly-plotted horror flick, and then becomes rather
awesome, so awesome that even some of Earl's inane bars can't ruin
what we have together.
9.
523
An
instrumental interlude produced by our host, credited as
randomblackdude. Not great, but there's a bit of promise here.
10.
UNCLE AL
A
quickie one-verse wonder from Earl that goes absolutely nowhere. The
Alchemist's production never settles into a groove, and this causes
our host's lyrics to sound more scattershot and plain than they
actually are. Which is too bad, as the song is ostensibly named
after Al Maman himself. Bleh.
11.
GUILD (FEAT. MAC MILLER)
Earl
looks outside of his comfort zone to secure a guest spot from MTV2's
favorite rapper Mac Miller, who, yes, contributes the first verse,
and...you know what? I can't do this anymore. This song was fucking
terrible. Fuck this shit.
12.
MOLASSES (FEAT. THE RZA)
The
RZA's vocal contribution to “Molasses” is (a) terrible (“I'll
fuck the freckles off your face, bitch!”? This is the guy who was
able to secure a multi-million dollar budget from Universal to write
and direct The Man With The Iron Fists?), and (b) weirdly apes a
similar sentiment from ScHoolboy Q on his recent (banger) “Collard Greens”.
Ignoring that, though, Prince Rakeem's instrumental sounds like
vintage Wu, as though he crafted the beat for Ol' Dirty Bastard and
forgot to ever let him hear it, and our host's bars mesh well with
the melody. Nothing of any substance is shared on here, but Wu stans
will probably seek it out anyway, so just know that “Molasses” is
alright, but not all right.
13.
WHOA (FEAT. TYLER, THE CREATOR)
Earl
invites Tyler back to the party, but this time Tyler reciprocates by
merely producing and spitting the hook, so he doesn't threaten to
disrupt the flow. The Creator does promise that “Whoa” will be
more of a throwback to the Earl that recorded, well, Earl, but while
our host's shit-talking abilities are out in full force, it's obvious
that he isn't the same kid: Thebe seems to have quickly figured out
that shock-value rhymes don't equal a lengthy career in our chosen
genre (unless your name is Eminem, in which case there are also many other
factors working in your favor), so he allows his skills to carry him
over the catchy instrumental threshold. This wasn't bad, and it has
just enough of a slapped-together quality to appease the backpackers
that find themselves lost in the Odd Future Wolf Gang Kill Them All
catalog.
14.
HOARSE
BadBadNotGood's
musical backing is much more expansive than everything else on Doris
to this point, and I'm including the Neptunes and RZA tracks in that
critique, but our host's slower flow gets buried fairly easily. He
also sounds phlegmy, especially during the first verse, which may
help explain the song's title. The production lends “Hoarse” a
dramatic intensity that is never quite fulfilled due to Earl's lack
of commitment. Oh well.
15.
KNIGHT (FEAT. DOMO GENESIS)
Doris
ends with an artistic cock-up, as Christian Rich's instrumental is
slowed down to a drug-induced crawl at the end of each participant's
verse, stretching out Domo and Earl's syllables far beyond reason,
and this seems to be done with absolutely no purpose, since as soon
as it occurs, the beat starts back up and all is well. Thankfully,
there wasn't anything worth checking for on “Knight”, so you
won't feel like you're missing anything when you cut this shit off
halfway through.
THE
LAST WORD: Although there are certainly flashes of brilliance, both
from a lyrical standpoint and behind the boards, Earl Sweatshirt only
manages to ride in the passenger seat of his own goddamn fucking
project. Doris somehow ends up being the polar opposite of Earl, and
not just because our host has mostly abandoned shock-value bars in
favor of attempted longevity in the rap game: musically, Earl seems
less inclined to give a shit, and the final product mirrors this
apathy, from the delivery of the bars that aren't coming from his
friends to the musical backing, which, with the exception of The
RZA's contribution, caters to our host's world instead of yanking him
out of his comfort zone. Doris could be seen as an anti-debut album
if one were convinced that our host had placed that much thought into
it: often downgraded to a guest star on his own shit, Earl forces
himself to try to steal the show from his game coworkers, only
succeeding about half the time. Still, when he scores, that's when
Doris springs to life, such as on “Chum” or “Sunday”,
although the latter is a bad example since Frank Ocean owns that
shit. Odd Future fanatics who prefer the Earl of, um, Earl will be
disappointed, while backpackers, underground heads, and people who
somehow found this blog while Googling album downloads and references to Nicolas Cage movies will merely feel indifferent. This is what
everyone in Blogland was eagerly anticipating? That's a lot of
unfair pressure to put on Earl: the kid probably does have a pretty
good album or two in him, but do you know how difficult it is to drum
up a classic right out the gate? In closing, Doris is boring, except
for when it isn't, which isn't often, but it isn't bad enough for me
to treat Earl Sweatshirt any differently: while this wasn't what I
was expecting, I'm not actually sure what I wanted to hear from the
dude, since I'm picky and fickle, so the fact that he managed to
release an album at all is amazing. Now if only he could sound more
interested in his own rhymes...
-Max
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i preferred your old reviews where you wrote about a track using one sentence.
ReplyDeletebig bear doin thangs should be your next write up
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/9/9f/Big_Bear_%27Doin_Thangs%27_Album_Cover.jpg
I don't give a flying fuck about Earl but I'm just glad you're back Max. I was worried after the Wu day that we wouldn't be hearing from you in a while
ReplyDeleteto ignore Tyler's latest album Wolf is kind of silly, especially when he showed a lot of artistic growth, but oh well. was really surprised that you didn't seem to love any of the tracks here, not even molasses. that RZA beat is nasty and I think Earl rips it up, but the first line of molasses is so good there was no way he could follow it up
ReplyDeletenothing to do with earl but I really like "collard greens".
ReplyDeleteYeah that song is dope
DeleteMax, I think you failed to note that the Knight instrumental is pretty much the same instrumental as the New Wu.
ReplyDeleteSame sample
Deletethanks for correcting me.
DeleteSeeing as the sample is the beat on OB4CL2 its pretty much the same beat.
Deletei think this album is boring in places but the highlights and overall vibe make it a pretty good debut album, i dont think u should ignore wolf the production is top quality and the rhymes are always entertaining
ReplyDeleteI second this. Doris was highly consistent which in some ways can be dull, but I still dug the sound. And Wolf really does have much better production and Tyler still had some goofy tracks but for the most part his lyrics were more mature.
DeleteRoc Marciano - Reloaded
ReplyDeleteAction Bronson - Any release you haven't reviewed
Odd Future is for little confused white kids
Max hates Roc Marciano lol. And I listen to Roc, Action Bronson, Meyhem Lauren etc., but Odd Future is still dope. You just can't handle rappers who be themselves probably cause you're a fake piece of shit
Deletewell that escalated quickly
DeleteIndeed.
Delete2nd that you should review big bear doin thangs
ReplyDeleteI don't review just cover art on the site, but if I did, it would be a masterpiece.
Deletewas really looking forward to this album after hearing Chum and Hive, featuring a stellar Vince Staples verse. However, after listening to the entire album i can only say that it is rambling, nonsensical (Not necessarily a bad thing, just look at ODB) and poorly constructed. I dunno about you lot but i like an album where each song feels different and not an album where everything just melds together in one big fucking mess. however Madvillainy was sort of like that and i love it. in conclusion i am very disappointed in this album and am now looking forward to a debut solo album by Vince Staples.
ReplyDeleteI agree, I feel as though Vince Staples trumped everything on Doris with just his verse.
DeleteMolasses is the shit and RZA needs to try and do more work with artists like this. RZA's been repping that experimental shit that these young artists think they pioneered, so he needs to keep it WU and stay relevant.
ReplyDeleteI think it's time for a Prodigy/Alchemist "Albert Einstein", Du-Rag Dynasty "360 Waves", or Pete Rock/Camp Lo "80 Blocks from Tiffany's part 2" review.
ReplyDeleteEarl Sweatshirt, 17 years old and the missing member of the hottest group in rap.
ReplyDeleteI had and still have a lot of faith in Earl and I must admit that I was a bit dissapointed about this record, too. There are a handful of tracks which i really dig (Sunday, Chum, Hive, Whoa, Hoarse) but the album has nothing memorable to me.
ReplyDeleteI think he should lock himself up in a basement, take some time off, do like a hundred beats and get some new inspiration for his writing. sort of a training camp, like Reggie Noble did before "Whut?!".
thank you Max for this review!
FYI, IDGAF about OFWGKTA
ReplyDeleteSo I will take this time to say that I'm hungry for a review from anyone from the DITC clik. Preferably the DITC compilation album DITC
I dont like Odd Future but I thought this was one of the best albums of the year...maybe its cause I'm 18 so I sorta get it.
ReplyDeleteYou shouldn't take Wolf out of consideration. I think you might enjoy it more than this album. It sounds nothing like Goblin if that helps.
ReplyDeleteThis album kinda fucking sucks. RZA's "guest spot" was pointless. Nothing in the world is more annoying than Tyler's shit voice/flow though.
ReplyDeleteDon't listen to them Max, Wolf is about 2.5 stars in my book because although he has matured
ReplyDeletehis voice/flow is too annoying, the only semi-intereting thing about it is the beats. Boy should stick to producing because the rest of Odd Future is pretty decent. Stop dragging them down Tyler!
I thought Doris was a great debut album considering that it was made by a teenager and that it received universal acclaim. Probably the most important thing about Doris is Earl's keen ability in using extremely intricate and nuanced rhyme schemes (which your review barely talks about). Additionally, the experimental, droning production creates a perfect landscape for Ear's dark subject matter. I agree that Doris could have been better and that there were too many features, but this review sounds like the hateful spewing of an old, white, narrow-minded, bitch.
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